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The bar chart illustrates the frequency with which Americans ate in fast food dining rooms from 2003 and 2013. It is clear that the majority of people in the US ate in fast food restaurants once a week and once or twice a month between 2003 and 2013. In contrast However, there were only a few people who went to fast food dining rooms every day, or even never over the 10-year-period. Looking at the ‘Once a week’ category, in all three years, Americans ate in fast food restaurants the most (2013년의 경우 아니기 때문에, 이렇게 쓸 수 없습니다.). There was a tiny increase percentage of people living in America between 2003 and 2006, from 31% to 34%, while four years later, which fell down to approximately 27% in 2010. Furthermore, only a few people in the US went to fast food restaurants for eating every single day. We can see that in 2003, about 4% of Americans went there, and over the 4-year-period, from 2006 to 2010 (연도를 확인해주세요!), had the same figures (approximately 2.5%), with nearly half of 5% people who never ate in fast food outlets. 안녕하세요:) 항상 첨삭해주셔서 감사합니다!♥
작성하는데 20분걸렸구요! 작성은 금방끝냈는데,,플래닝이 오래걸렸습니다 흙.. 글자수는 177입니다. 목표점수 최소 6.5 입니다. ps. 세개로 나눠진건 처음해봐서.. 정보를 다 적기엔 너무 시간이 많이 걸릴 것 같아서,, 눈대중으로 제일 큰거랑 제일 작아보이는걸로 작성했는데..괜찮을까요?
네 우르르쾅쾅님, 원래 태스크1 표 문제에서는 다 적는 게 아닙니다. 오히려 다 적으면 마이너스에요. 요약/비교/분석을 해주시는 게 맞습니다. 즉, 지금처럼 제일 큰-작은 친구들, 그리고 예외가 되는 친구들, 급증하는 친구들 위주로 대충 몇 개 골라 적으시면 돼요. 그렇게만 하고 어휘+문법에서 선방하시면 6.5는 물론 7.0도 충분히 가능합니다.
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