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The four charts
depict the proportion of three ways of land usage, non-agricultural land,
arable land, and pasture land in Portugal, New Zealand, Canada, and Norway. In
general, each country shows quite different percentage in the purpose of land
use, but all of them have non-agricultural lands as the highest category. (간만에 Overview를 잘 잡아주셨네요. 단, 지금 글의 경우도 but 이하가 없었으면 문제가 있었을 겁니다.)
To have a
closer look at each country, Norway is noticeable of having the highest share of
non-agricultural land by 96 percent, followed by Canada possessing 93 percent of it. Both countries illustrate a
similar trend of having very little share of pasture and arable land. According
to this, it is clear that Canada and Norway do not have efficient land for agriculture
development. (여기부터는 새로운 문단으로 넣으시면 돼요.) Whereas Meanwhile, New Zealand has the highest share of pasture land by 48
percent (뉴질랜드 쪽의 경우도 제일 높은 건 non-agri 쪽입니다.). Unlike the other three countries that have some land purpose used less
than 2 percent, Portugal utilize its land relatively fairly in all kinds of measures
for at least 9 percent ('상대적으로' 라는 표현을 넣어서 그나마 낫긴 하지만, 일반적으로 9%를 가지고 fairly라고 할 수는 없습니다.). Portugal has the most arable land proportion of 34
percent.
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