The pie charts below show the percentage of electricity production by fuel source in France in 1990 and 2010.
As an overall trend, it is clearly apparent the use of electricity production by fuel sources had dropped except for nuclear power, which increased noticeably. The lion share of electricity production in France in 1990 and 2010 was for Nuclear power, whereas natural gas experienced the major declined in percentage. (사실 여기는, '1990년에는 상대적으로 다양한 ~~들이 고른 분포를 보인 반면, 2010년에는 그러한 균형이 깨지며 ~가 상대적으로~' 이렇게 한 문장으로 적는 게 제일 깔끔하긴 합니다. 지금도 틀린 건 절대 아니고요.)
In 1990, nuclear power as a source of energy stood at 17% of electricity production in France. Natural gas and coal both showed the same percentage by 28% and oil was not far behind. However Meanwhile, the use of hydro power indicated only a small proportion of electricity production in 1990 and 2010.
Two resources of energy production in France in 2010, both of natural gas and coal, dropped in rate respectively, and that was a short 13% down for coal and a far higher decrement of 4% for natural gas. Also, natural gas and oil depicted were the same percentages, compared to 1990 when they provided a different amount of electricity production even they provided a different amount of electricity production in 1990.
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