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Many educationalists say that there is an advisable age for formal education. In this regard, it is often argued that children should start it before the age of seven. However, some people think that it should not. In this essay, I will discuss both views and present my opinion.
Actually, there can be advantages of going to formal schools before seven. There are countless cases of children at the early stage of life learning many things while playing freely, and but in order for this (이게 문맥상 조금 더 적합하지 않을까 생각됩니다.) to be more effective, they should be advised at schools with care. When they are in full-time education, they can be more safe and in control, and their development can be more successful.
Meanwhile, children can start formal education after their seventh birthday. Formal education is mostly full time, and students can follow the curriculum well when they reach the age of seven and are more mature. After the certain age, all children have the similar interests and can get the average of learning abilities. This development can help the schools give them better (suitable, appropriate 등이 나아보입니다.) lessons.
In conclusion, I personally believe that children should start formal education after the age of seven. This is because they are better at staying in schools (더 성숙하기 때문에~등으로 구체화해주시는 걸 추천드립니다.) and learning. |