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The first bar graph shows the number of the British who travelled to the US and US people who travelled to the UK between 2011 and 2015. The second bar graph depicts how much amount of money UK tourists to the US and US tourists to the UK the aforementioned group (이렇게 넘기면 훨씬 깔끔합니다.) spent during the same period. Overall, more British went to the US than Americans went to the UK, and UK tourists spent more money there.
As clearly seen from the first graph, the number of UK and US tourists both fluctuated during the 5-year period. However, the number of UK tourists to the US was always higher than the number of US tourists to the UK, and the gap remained stable at roughly 0.5 million people except for 2012. (너무 간추리셨고, 구체적인 수치의 적시도 거의 없기 때문에 이와 관련해서 보완해주시는 게 좋습니다. 최소 밑의 문단 정도는 되어야 합니다.)
It is notable that the amount of money which UK and US tourists spent steadily rose. Specifically, the figures of UK and US tourists remained stable at around 4 billion dollars and 3 billion dollars each, from 2011 to 2013. However, the amount of money (이것+spent가 너무 자주 반복되고 있기 때문에 대체해주시는 게 좋습니다.) which UK tourists to the US spent drastically rose, reaching almost 6 billion dollars in 2015. There was also a slight increase in the amount of money that US tourists to the UK spent, and the figure was 4 billion dollars in the same year.
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