With the development of public transportation, the necessity of investment in building and improving public transportation is increasing in society. Some people argue that constructing new railway lines for very fast trains needs to be prioritized. However, others think that improving existing public transportation is more important than making new railways.
On
the one hand, it is valuable to manage that managing public transport which is already
taken by many people. Spending money on repairing and improving existing public
transport is able to make a large number of public conveniences. This effort
can satisfy people's small complaints when they use public transportation. If a
government doesn't (줄임말은 풀어써주세요!) address small problems related to public inconvenience,
public transportation would be an obsolete system in a society.
On
the other hand (유정님 실력이면 on the one/other hand의 뻔한 표현 없이도 글을 전개할 수 있기 때문에 저도 바꾸라고 권장드렸겠지만, 지금은 스피킹이 더 중요하니까 여기는 크게 신경쓸 필요는 없습니다.), I am of the opinion that there needs to be sufficient money for
building very fast trains. As time goes on, people get to need more convenient
and useful technologies. Constructing faster trains than the past helps citizens
not waste time on moving. To illustrate, a new railway line for Busan to Seoul
was made a few years ago, and, this decreased time for moving between the two
cities. The line is popular transportation and users are satisfied with this
line. This example shows that it It is necessary to spend money on making useful systems for the public.
To
sum up, from my perspective, there are advantages and disadvantages to building
new railway lines for fast trains. However, It it is evident that fast trains
would help people move cities easily and conveniently, provided that the lines
are built after taking account of necessity and disadvantages.
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