In the future, more people will choose to go on holiday in their own country and not travel abroad on holiday.
Do you agree or disagree?
There is an opinion that a number of people will spend time for holidays within their country rather than going abroad. ('미래에' 라는 표현이 들어가야 합니다.) Personally, I support this idea and the reason why I think like that will be presented in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, the occurrence occurring of Covid-19 would
limit people from moving to foreign countries. This is because in order to stop
spreading this disease, many nations are taking actions such as closing the borders
except essential trips, making it that are unable for people to travel other countries. Obviously,
this pandemic has changed the modern people’s life styles completely. Also, it
is reported that people would not be allowed to travel out of their own country
freely until the proper vaccine and treatment are developed. Accordingly, those
people who have desires to explore a new world would have to remain in their own
country even in holiday seasons.
One top of that, even if the borders would be opened to the public among nations, many experts assert that the flight ticket fee would go up significantly due to social distancing in the airplane. This is because to secure enough room between passengers to prevent the contagion, the flight’s capacity that the number of people can be transported would be diminished that would lead to much higher costs than before. Furthermore, many bankruptcies of the low-cost airlines such as Eastar Airline that enable people to enjoy overseas trips cheaply would accelerate on increasing ticket prices. Apparently, not only it could make people hesitate to go abroad during their vacation, but also those people who are looking for the alternative ways would choose domestic travels.
In conclusion, even though there are people’s desires to explore foreign countries, I completely agree with the statement. This is because considering the critical pandemic situation as well as such higher flight costs, less people will be allowed to trip to overseas countries on holiday in the future compared to the past.
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