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We can see similar types of buildings a lot in the street. The buildings are renovated and are replaced to similar designs for several reasons. It includes that how they are used and how old they are. Urban areas around the world are becoming more and more similar because they are civilized.
There are a couple of reasons that they look alike. First, people’s lifestyles are becoming similar. A standard citizens’ lifestyles are working weekdays and resting on the weekend. The buildings are being evolved to meet their lifestyles. For example, company buildings usually consist of many offices on each floors, lobbies on first floor and other facilities.
In addition, an increase of franchises affects to the similarity of the buildings. The franshises pursue to have same designs everywhere in the world to let their customers realize them. For example, Starbucks which is the biggest coffee shop chain around the world has green or black colored designed banners every their stores.
There are a few benefits for buildings become similar. Strangers who visit a certain city are able to realize buildings’ purposes. They can guess the functions of the buildings even they visit the cities first time.
On the other hand, the buildings would lose their distinct characters. They reflect culture of the cities and some architectures represnt the city. Numourous tourists visit these landmarks to see the cities’ traditions and cultures which are represented from those buildings. If they lost their own characters, they would become normal cities.
The buildings have been reflected the cities that they are built in and peoples’ culture and tradition. Preserving the cultures and traditions are one of the most important value in these days. Because many cities lost theirs. I insist that it is a bad thing that establishing buildings similarily.