The graph provides
the amount of wheat exports to Australia, Canada and the European community from 1985
to 1990. In general, the The most striking trend during the period was shown by Canada, reaching
the biggest amount
of export in 1988 with the figure of 25 millions tonnes (rainv님 실력이면 1. s가 안 들어가는 거, 2. tonnes를 넣는 것 정도는 당연히 맞춰주셔야 합니다. 다른데에도 싹 다 바꿔주세요~) and Australia showed a bottom
in 1989 with the number of around 11 millions which is the lowest throughout
the period among the three countries. (여기는 엔터를 한번 더 치셔야 합니다.)
Looking to
Canada, it indicated a significant increase from 1986 to 1988, started around 17
millions and but reached 25 millions. However, this dramatically rose to around 13
millions in 1989 and recovered to around almost 20 million in 1990. In
contrast, Australia exhibited a downward trend during the research period, by showing
a decrease from 17millions in 1986 to 12millions in 1990. Lastly, the European
community saw a little bit of fluctuation from 1985 to 1988, but this number rapidly
grow to 15 millions in 1988 and finally reached 22 millions in 1990.
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총평: (6/6/6/6) 6.0
이번 task1은 제가 rainv님께 기대하는 글과 거리가 꽤 있습니다. 그나마 단어가 조금 괜찮아서 채점관에 따라 6.5까지는 가능할 수는 있겠지만, 충격요법을 쓸 겸 저는 6.0으로 낮춰졌습니다.
단위는 꼭 정확하게 챙겨주시고, 꺾은선 그래프에서는 수치 간 역전도 최소 한 번은 다뤄주세요!
수고하셨습니다 :)