Q.
Some people believe that it is best to
accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others
argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both these views and give your
opinion.
A
In our lives, sometime people face with a
bad situation. With regards to this, it is often argued whether we should (asfdlsa님 실력이면 이거는 당연히 맞춰주셔야 합니다.) often argues that if we overcome this
obstacle or just accept it. This essay will discuss both point of views and my
opinion as well.
Depending on the situation, even though they
knew it was a bad suggestion, sometimes people have no choice but to accept. Form
a realistic point of view, for example, if someone has a family but he or she
cannot afford to take care of one’s family, an inevitable choice will be needed. Moreover,
if people do not have enough skills or ability, it would be hard to get high
wages. The problem of the acceptance of a bad situation is that it can lead to
someone’s depression.
However, I also strongly believe that
trying hard in times of hardship can lead to an opportunity for the better situation. There
is no doubt that people have to try in any circumstances for the better future.
I agree with it is easy to say but being depressing in a bad situation cannot
change anything. (여기는 댓글 한번 주세요!) In other words, in order to escape from a bad situation, it is
better to try hard and have a being positive mind. For instance, many successful
people also had bad circumstances, such as Lebron James, who is the one of the hall of
famers in basketball. His family was so poor so his mother could not afford to
buy a pair of shoes for him. However, even in this situation, he tried harder
and he became a world sports star.
To conclude, I might be able to say most of
people have been a bad situation. I strongly believe the future will be changed depending depends on how people react about this.
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