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In these present ages, whether spening time with family is more important than work time has arisen a sparking debate. Some people assert that spending time to family activities is more beneficial, wheares others believe that working is more valuable. Personaly, I am in favour of the formal view.
There are many advantages in spending time with family members. To start with, family times dedicate to one's sense of happyness. This is because family members not only share a lot of memories of the past, but also understand each other very much. For example, family gatherings such as birthday party, summer holiday and wedding ceremony build a strong emotioal bond between family members, making them happy.
Moreover, other family members can give a guidence to solve many problems in one's lives. Each family member is fairly frank to each other, therefore they can give a relevant advices without any lier. This advices are totally based on each members distinct ideas and old experiences, hence it can be really helpful even though in trouble situations
Yet I cannot concede that spending time to work is important, when it comes to making a living. However, once money income from work exceeds minimum wages, family time gives more valuable things.
In conclusion, with regard to sense of happyness and pratical advices in family members, I firmly believe that spending time with family is more crucial that working time.
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