What is the power that music holds? (지금은 연설문의 대본을 쓰는 과정이 아니기 때문에, 의문형은 따로 쓰지 않는다고 보셔도 무방합니다.) Some people think of the music as a good means of gathering people regardless of cultures and ages. In my perspective, I agree with this idea since the enjoyment which is from music can attract people and music can be a source of conversation as well.
To begin with, giving people powerful energy, the music itself strongly attracts people from various cultures and ages. For instance, there are countless people in the music festivals who come from different nations and their ages range from youth and the older. Looking at a wide range of people who come to festivals with their enthusiasm for the music, it is clear that music has a power to bring people together regardless of cultures and ages. (가사와 상관없이, 혹은 세대 간 차이와 상관 없이 등의 내용을 추가해주시면 금상첨화입니다.)
Moreover, music can be a link between people by offering diverse sources of conversation. If people have a similar musical taste, they can share their opinion on the specific music genre that they enjoy, which only demands to focus on the music not to consider their cultures and ages. For example, if someone is really fond of Soul soul music, it is possible to enjoy the club listening to those types of music and discuss it. Not only that, these days many people around the world gather on YouTube (참고로 이거 틀렸다고 감점되는 건 아니니까 걱정하지 마세요!) Youtube channels to share their ideas for music.
For these reasons, I firmly believe that music is an efficient method of gathering people who want to share their ideas or feelings on music, even if although their cultures and ages are different.
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