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These days, the world ¹is(has been) amazingly changed compared to compare(comparing?) with the past. In the past, people were able to see can see(have been able to see) a plenty of plants and wild animals in(×) anywhere, while these days, it is not the case people can't(cannot) do. Also, a great deal of species are endangered for(from) living on the Earth. This is because many poachers hunt the wild animals and the environment is contaminated due to many garbage (참고로 얘 불가산입니다.). People can protect many species of animals and plants by recycling and implementing(implementation) a policy to ban the hunting. (이 마지막 부분에서 재활용과 policy는 순서를 바꿔주셔야 합니다. 그 앞 문장에서 hunting이 먼저 나왔으니까요.)
Selfish and greeds of human beings have led allow a number of species to be in danger of endangered for(by) extinction. Firstly, hunting for clothes or accessories causes certain animals to fall in danger. For example, in Korea, the amount of tigers are reduced compared comparing with the past because many poachers hunted them for their leathers and teeth to make accessories. Secondly, a lot plenty of garbage are generated by producing various items and packages. This phenomenon reduces the range of circumstances for animals and plants because many garbage contaminate the(×) earth or the ocean.
To resolve these problems, individuals and societies devise some solutions (여기서 엔터 없이 갑니다. 아마 실수인듯 하지만요.) Firstly, individuals should recycle accurately and some corporations can manufacture recycled items for endangered species. Secondly, each countries' governments should implement a policy to restrict to the hunting. This policy is able to protect certain animals such as whales or elephants from poachers.
In conclusion, many species of animals and plants face to extinction due to circumstances of pollution and reckless hunting. However, human beings can protect them by recycling and banning hunting.
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