This line graph illustrates two different staying methods of millions of visitors and total tourists in a Caribbean island from 2010 to 2017.
Overall, the number of visitors who stayed on cruise ships or on the island islands saw an increase over the time period. As a result, the figure for total visitors to a Caribbean island rose significantly over the 7 years period.
To begin with, the number of visitors who stayed on cruise ships experienced a slight rise with some fluctuations between around 0.3 million (생략하실 거면 얘를 생략하셔야 했습니다. 저 뒤 0.5에는 단위가 붙어줘야 해요.) in 2010 and 0.5 in 2013. After that, the figure had increased gradually from 0.5 in 2013 to 1.5 million in 2015. In particular, the number of visitors staying on cruise ships exceeded the number of visitors staying on the island since 2015, then it climbed up steadily to 2 million in 2017.
On the other hand, the number of visitors staying on the island stood at nearly 0.8 million in 2010. In the following years, the number of visitors who stayed on the island increased significantly from approximately 0.8 in 2011 to 1.5 million in 2013, then the figure leveled off at 1.5 million between 2013 and 2017. Therefore, the total number of tourists on Caribbean islands started at 1 million visitors at the beginning of the period, and then it had skyrocketed by 2017 (제가 썼다면 아마 얘를 뒤로 보냈을 것 같긴 한데, 크게 중요한 사항은 아니므로 그냥 넘기겠습니다.) at 3.5 million visitors.
안녕하세요 오늘 그래프는 25 분이 좀 넘게 걸렸고 설명을 최대한 줄여보려 했으나 요약이 너무 어렵습니다.. ㅠㅠ 과감히 버리지 못하겠어요 ㅠㅠ 그 제가 쓴거보시면 visitors staying on island 이 카테고리에서 levelled out이라고 살짝 내려간걸 빼고 썼는데 그래도 되는걸까요? 세세히 따지고 들어가면 틀린 표현이긴 해도, 큰 틀에서는 상관 없습니다. 어차피 지금 글은 그게 문제가 아니라서요.) 오늘 첨삭도 감사드립니다! 좋은 하루되세용!