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Some people believe that only those who make a lot of money are successful people are the only successful life which makes much money. I do not support this idea because to build a successful life, they need a combination of many things, not just money.
Firstly, money does not play a role in successful lives as wealth the wealthy do not allow them to be fully satisfied with their life. It is a well-known fact that despite earning a lot of money, many rich people think they are not having a good enough life. For example, when celebrities or sports stars who make a fortune are have interviewed, they would tell people money gives us happiness as part of life. (여기는 어떤 의미로 적어주셨나요? 댓글 주시면 확인하고 수정해드리겠습니다.) As this shows, only money does not provide us with happiness and success.
Moreover, achieving success needs many factors because people feel happy when they are properly balanced in many ways. Many experts believe that most people feel more satisfied with their life by living in harmony which has a combination of family, money, health, honor, and relationship. For example, fathers in South Korea said that they used to tie up with their work their whole life so they could not spend time with their family. After they retired from the workplace, even though they made make a fortune, they considered they did not live a are not successful life because they loss their important parts of lives lost like family relationships or their health. This clearly illustrates that one material like money can not reach to be successful.
In conclusion, although people consider that a lot of money represents success, in my opinion, it is possible for people to be filled with many factors going towards a successful life.
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