▶ Your Answer :
It is true that motorways help people to travel
more easily and conveniently by allowing the use of cars. However, there are
also some negative effects that should be solved urgently. In this essay, I will
tackle some problems and possible solutions in detail.
To begin with, while it gives us many a lot of
benefits, increasing motorways are destroying our nature environment such as
animal habitats, which causes animals to lose lost its home, die and sometimes even
become extinct because of human’s convenience and profits. To address this
problem, we should make a wildlife sanctuary and not permit to be developed in
this area. This approach could less effect on slow/decrease the reduction of animals compared
to the past. Also, we should look after them carefully and continuously.
Secondly, due to the expansion of the car
roads, pedestrian roads are getting narrow. This means that people are often experiencing
uncomfortable when they walk along the road. A possible approach of this is
that governments can encourage people to use trains more in order to reduce the
number of using the cars. As a result, we can expand pedestrian roads, while
reducing motorways.
Lastly, motorways cost a lot of money to maintain and
support it when it gets damaged from bad weather or car accidents. So before we
install motorways, we should make an efficient plan to minimize its maintenance
cost. If we just make roads, we would have to should spend a lot of money again to recover it.,
To sum up, despite these problems caused by motorways are
serious, if we follow these solutions i mentioned above, there could be positive
results.
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