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<Topic> Many experts have noted that people
in modern society do not exercise often. What is a cause and solution to this problem? |
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These days, people in the world have came across
numerous changes in daily lives for the last decades. Working out is
considered as one of those because people tend not to conduct exercise
compared to the past. Unfortunately, researchers opine that it may occur
countless drawbacks on the body condition of human beings. In this essay, the
reasons and the measures regarding the scarcity of workout will be discussed.
One reason is developed sedentary activities. Owing to the enhanced technology, we are
able to relish countless information and entertainment programs such as
games, watching films and TV and smartphones. Nonetheless, it causes the
decrease of physical activities. The other reason can be the development of
transportation system. Due to not only the explosive growth of the number of
personal cars but also public transports such as rails, underground tubes,
buses and so forth, people do not have to walk a long distance to commute or
go to other regions. Although some researchers advice to people to do
exercise, people nowadays hardly do it because they can conduct innumerable
things at home or inside the building.
It might seem
difficult to encourage people to do workout, there are some solutions can be
suggested in order to offset the problems. Firstly, the administration may
promote and announce upsides of exercise by conducting campaign or broadcasting
TV advertisement. After BBC released a documentary regarding the impact of
physical activities, the survey’s result showed a dramatic change as the
number of people who started the regular workout flared up. Secondly,
rendering outdoor activity programs in the school can be the other measure.
This is because if institutes put exercise into the obligation curriculum,
young students are able to improve their body condition and working out can
be their hobby even when they grow up.
In
condensation, by conducting the nationwide campaign through advertisement or
broadcast, people’s cognition in terms of physical activities might be
changed. In the long term, children can be used to the workout thanks to
school exercise programs and they might thrive daily exercise even after
being an adult. |
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