Everyone should stay in school until the age of eighteen. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In modern society, whether or not students should stay in school until the age of eighteen under eighteen should go to schools is a heated discussion. Some people think children ought to go to schools until eighteen while other think they do not need to. I think students need to go to schools to prepare before experiencing society and they still need protection.
First of all, schools, basically, is performed has a role of performing as the social organizations. Before being growing up into adults, students should learn how to communicate and interact with others to prepare for the real society before going to college or the workplaces. Many schools already prepared how to deal with adults’ world. For example, some schools made a curriculum for students who want to learn skills and the institution tried to help students not fail in society by adding communication or business corses not to fail in society.
Secondly, students are still young to experience the harsh society so schools should (둘은 의미가전혀 다릅니다.) can protect them from the danger. Educational organizations are the second guardian after the parents and its value becomes larger, since the nowadays parents less focus on their kids. For instance, if students did something wrong such as committing a crime, even though it is totally students’ fault, schools can help them by educating and supporting them to prevent recidivism.
To sum up, whether or not students should go to school until the age of eighteen or not become one of the debatable discussions but I believe that students should stay in schools until to prepare their adult’s life after graduating through as learning communication and schools can protect them from the dangers.
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