Some people believe it is better to raise children in the city, while others consider countryside to be a more suitable choice. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Many parents are considering which regions between urban areas and rural areas they have to rear their children. Although I accept that raising children in the countryside could be beneficial, I believe that it is much better for parents to raise their offspring in the cities.
To start with, there are two reasons why some people prefer to rear their offspring in the rural regions. First of all, some parents think, unlike living and growing in the cities, that adolescents can develop their sense of sociality by interacting with their friends in the nature after school and cooperating with neighbors when there are some problems in a village. At the same time, unlike dwelling in the cities that are full of various detrimental pollutions, children residing in the rural provinces do not need worry about suffering from illnesses such as respiratory disease or asthma due to uncontaminated environments.
In spite of advantages of living in the rural areas mentioned above, I believe that raising children in the metropolitan regions is a much better choice. It is true that an overwhelming number of educational institutions are located in the center of the city. For this reason, children can naturally have a wide range of choices. For instance, children living in the center of the cities could enroll ballet, clarinet, violin classes, which are normally impossible for children who live in the countryside. Moreover, these days, It has become commonplace that both mom and dad work from 9 to 7. This means that child care systems like after school class or night kindergarten services become a must to parents. Hence, it is important to reside in the cities that are running miscellaneous child care systems for convenience of children and parents.
By way of conclusion, it seems to me that raising children in the rural provinces has of course many advantages, but there are more advantages when parents raise their children in the cities.
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