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In modern society, it is true that the number of kids that married couples have on average has been decreasing for several decades now. I firmly believe that this brings a positive effect to our society because it would solve the unemployment problem and lead to have a better education environment regarding education.
To begin with, there would be much more job opportunities which would solve the unemployment issue in today’s competitive world. Recent study conducted by Seoul National University, one of the prestigious universities in Korea, proved that the unemployment rate gradually decreased from 70 percent in 1967 to 45 percent in 2019 as a consequence of less individuals searching for a place to work. (얘는 이전과 마찬가지입니다. 이렇게 쓰는 건 아무 의미 없으니까 주의해주시고, 특히 Zoomin님처럼 최상위권 학생들의 경우 이렇게 쓰면 타격이 더합니다.) When unemployment issues are solved, citizens would be healthier mentally and physically since they would be less stressed.
On top of that, better quality of education environment would be provided for those newly born generation since the class sizes would be reduced. My experience when I was in elementary school would be a compelling example of this. We had 40 people in my homeroom class, however, the amount of complaints from the parents and guardians were immaculate. As a result, our class sizes were plunged to half and the satisfactory rate was 80 percent according to our school. Due to the fact that it is going to accelerate the learning environment and lead them to be a future leader, (여기는 문장이 끊겼네요! 이러한 것들 역시 Zoomin님처럼 최상위권에서는 다 치명적으로 작용하니까 주의해주셔야 합니다. 이거는 문장을 완성하고 댓글로 검사 받으세요!)
To sum up, because having an extended education and solving the issue of unemployment would be a big plus to our society, I am confident to say that the number of children that married couples have on average has been declining is a positive development.
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