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Even though agriculture agricultural technology is getting more advanced, some countries and people still struggle with famine. There are a lot of reasons and causes in this problem, but (참고로 여기는 and도 됩니다.) I would like to offer my perspective and solutions.
These days, the technology and tools for agriculture have been improved, and thanks to this development, people can live more easily and decrease in concern when it comes to hunger or food. However, this development is just offered to developed countries. Because the advanced technology occur mainly in developed countries owing to government’s aid and still developing countries can not afford to prepare budget and abilities. For these reasons, people in developed countries people are the same compared with before the advance in agriculture as developing countries people are getting full. (이 마지막 문장의 경우 일단 임시조치만 취해놨는데, 이 문장에서 의도하신 바에 대해서 댓글 주시면 확인하고 더 정확하게 수정해드릴게요.)
However, if developed countries support provisions to developing countries and agriculture technologies, the problem of starvation will be relieved. First of all, developed countries should provide the source of food complimentarily or export through more cheaper price than other countries such as deduction of tax. Secondly, some non-profits or profits companies will assist agriculture technology and education. For this action, both of countries can gain positive effects, developing countries people can learn agriculture skills and they can be self-sufficient and developed countries can make job opportunities.
To sum up, the problem of hunger hungry problem is serious even in modern society due to polarization between developing and developed countries, but I firmly believe that some countries which have a variety of technology and foods can support and tackle this problem. (251)
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