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<Topic> The money spent by governments on
space programmes would be better spent on vital public services such as
schools and hospitals. To what extent do you agree or disagree? |
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Although some people think the development of space business is indispensable,
many people feel that there are countless countries on the Earth which are
suffering from the paucity and the scarcity of social security services. For example,
the United States invests biblical national budget to the universe programmes such
as shooting the satellites to the space or cultivating astronauts, whereas some
Americans in destitution are not able to enhance their education level owing to
the excessive college tuition fees, possess sufficient medical insurances. As
lots of people condemn the US education and medical system which require gargantuan
expenditures from administrations, I think improving social services and education
quality are more salient that aerospace businesses.
What
is more, by investing more budget to support the public school such as supporting
more sports equipment to school for physical activities like basketball stand, subsidize
sports teams of school or patronage of academic accomplishments, young students
are able to develop their body condition or talented students may contribute themselves
to their mother country to repaid the decadelong investments. For instance, if young
athletes are able to be endorsed by administrations, it may bring crucial impacts
on physical achievement or they can be the great athlete. Messy from Argentina and
Christian Ronald from Portugal who are great soccer players in history, they
had been supported by governments as prodigies thanks to their natural talent. These
days, they repay their owes to their countries as the most famous football athletes
in the world.
In
condensation, as I do not think that the national plan of space brings practical
advantages to the people, the public services such as social health care, education
programs far outweigh space projects. |
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