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<Topic> Some people think that modern technology is making people more sociable, while others think it is making them less sociable. Discuss both views and give your opinion. |
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There is
no denying that human beings are able to indulge innumerable benefits from state-of-the-art
technology. Nevertheless, some people are anxious that the hi-technology conveys
dissocializing among people in communities, whereas the other counterparts believe
that it thrives the friendliness of people and brings positive impacts on human
beings. Although I firmly agree with the statement that the developed technology
makes people individualize, the polar opposite viewpoints will be discussed in
this essay.
It is true to say that people are able to
socialize with other people easier than the past via social media and group
chats in smartphone applications. Those users share interesting information to
their acquaintances easily and pursue biblical conversations with other people
who have a similar interest with them by posting attractive photos or viewpoints
in letters. Furthermore, if people reside in overseas nations due to their career
or academic achievements, they can enjoy the real-time-communication with their
loved ones who live in their homeland thanks to the enhanced technology. Thus,
now people relish manifold social activities irresponsive of the location, time
difference.
On the contrary, I would like to give my
voice to the downside of hi-technology. The reason can be that forging
the up-to-minute technology requires a plethora of money. For example, in
order to acquire the latest information, people usually use the Internet website
such as Google or YouTube, which can only be used through electronic devices like
smartphones, laptops, and so forth. Then, people in destitution or elderly citizens
can be less sociable and they might not be able to possess a cascade of advantages
from hi-technology. This is because elderly people hardly get into
the swing of deploying the latest technology and people in penury cannot
afford to purchase extravagant electronic devices. Subsequently, it may reduce
the solidarity in society among people in different generations or wealthiness
levels.
In reinstate,
albeit no doubt that human beings these days are blessed as they can socialize
with other people anytime and anywhere, I would like to ventilate that some
people are inevitably isolated owing to the low income or the paucity of familiarization.
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