목표점수는 6.5 이구요.
올해 11월 첫째주 시험보는 것이 목표입니다.
시간은 20분보다 조금 덜 걸린것 같습니다.
The
graph depicts statistical information about the oil usage rates of total energy
use within four countries from 1966 to 2006, which shows that the rates of oil
usage in each country started similarly in 1966. Interestingly enough Overall 혹은 In general (이 두 개 중 하나는 그냥 무조건 Task1 Overview에 넣어주시면 됩니다. 참고로, interestingly enough는 task1에서 쓸 일 없습니다. 2에서나 쓰시면 돼요.), the
usage of oil in Italy fluctuated, while the percentages of oil usage in Sweden
and Iceland decreased and the usage rate in Turkey went up.
It
is clearly shown from the chart that the oil usage rates in Sweden and Iceland
similarly decreased. As for Sweden, it fell by more than half from 80% in 1966
to 35% in 2006. When it comes to Iceland, there was a steady decline in the
percentage of oil usage compared to total energy use from 70 % (여기는 띄어쓰기 문제가 없다고 가정하고 채점하겠습니다. 실전에서는 이런 것도 다 감점에 들어가니까 주의해주세요!) in 1966 to 20%
in 2006.
It
is also noteworthy that the rate of oil usage in Sweden was equal to Turkey’s
percentage in 1967. However, in the case of the year 1986, Turkey’s rate was
twice the percentage in Sweden, which were 78% and 40%, respectively. As for
Italy, the oil usage rate of total energy use slightly fluctuated between 85%
and 95% throughout the period. (내용상 보완점에 대해서는 밑에서 말씀드리겠습니다.)
총평: (6/7/6/6) 6.5
일단 적어도 '틀린' 건 많지 않기 때문에, 시간만 잘 맞춰주신다면 6.5 정도는 괜찮을 거에요.
대신 내용상 보완점은 있습니다. 꺾은선 그래프에서는 수치 간 역전을 다루는 것이 중요합니다. 지금의 경우 3번의 역전이 이루어지는데, 이를 다 다룰수는 없다고 하더라도 최소 1개 가량은 꼭 언급해주세요!
수고하셨습니다 :)