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Today’s transportation systems are not so perfect and require efforts from the public to reduce many problems that they have. One possible solution can be allowing bicycles in vehicle lanes. There might be people who think that it does not really work, but I assume that there are definitely many ways that they can improve the environment as this essay will discuss in detail after providing both views.
Unquestionably, bicycles cannot always be effective solutions to the pollution problems of pollution (이게 살짝 더 문어체에 가깝긴 한데, 당연히 필수는 아니며, 저도 그냥 바꿀 게 없어서 건드렸습니다.) because there is limit in the usage of them. Although many cyclists enjoy riding a bicycle, the environment cannot sometimes support them. Especially in winter, the weather is not kind to them, and road conditions are often too extreme to enjoy the speed. Commuters cannot use their bicycles, and the government has to plan alternatives to reduce air pollution.
Notwithstanding, bicycles are healthy not just for the environment but also for individuals. They do not cause heavy traffic and pollute the air and just make the riders do more when they go to work. At work, people have to spend most of their time while sitting down, and this inactivity often lead them to have serious health problems in the long run. However, having healthy habits such as riding a bicycle can prevent this consequence.
So (문장을 and but so로 시작하는 것은 권장드리지는 않습니다.), I personally believe that bicycles can benefit both individuals and the environment when they are continuously being in use. People are able to improve their physical health while being active, and the air that they breathe in can also be purified. |