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Nowadays, having a hard time is a common
experience for everyone each person. some Some people believe that people have to
accept and endure this time while other people argue that everybody can improve
this situation through trying hard. Personally, I agree with those people who believe
people have to do their best to improve.
Firstly, there are people who firmly believe
that acceptance is the only safe way because trying to improve can make the
situation worse. Assume that there is a student who is suffering from a
shortage of money. (구어입니다. ~를 해보자. 라고 말하는 식이죠.) If he/she (he로 가실 거면 쭉 he로 가시고, he/she로 가실 거면 쭉 그걸로 가셔야지 지금처럼 왔다갔다 해서는 안 됩니다.) concentrates on a part-time job for money to
improve this situation, he would it would be a waste of a tuition fee. Moreover, he would not
be able to graduate his college and it causes more suffering from money. In
other words, people need needs to accept hard time and try to become used to it as
the bad situation can be a lesson teachable moment for the future.
On the contrary, trying to improve a bad
situation is always recommended by many people as it is more beneficial at a
long-term point of view. Take an example of unsatisfying job. (얘도 어느정도 구어입니다. 그냥 For example, if ~~ 로 가시면 돼요.) If someone found
that he/she has a talent in other filed and try to change and improve it, it
would be more efficient at long term professional development since It would be
a great asset to his/her skillset. On the top of that, finally it would leads
to increase lead to an increase of productivity. Not only that this kind of try is crucial given
that physical and mental illness are based on the stress. (얘는 문장이 꼬인 것 같은데, 댓글 주시면 확인하고수정해드리겠습니다.)
To sum up, it is undeniable that
enduring hard time is needed as trying for improvement sometimes causes a worse
situation. On the other hand, doing one's best to change a bad situation is wise
for themselves mentally and physically. In my opinion, when it comes to a
hardship, it is not a thing that should be endured but a challenging time to
overcome for their future as well as their health. |