You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.
The graphs indicate indicated overseas students and local students’ enrolments in Australian universities from 2001 to 2010.
(여기에 In general로 시작하는 Overview를 넣어주시면 됩니다. 두 자료의 특징을 1~2줄로 요약해주시면 돼요.)
First, the total of overseas students have been (다른데에도 싹 다 현재완료를 과거로 바꾸시면 됩니다.) continuously increased from 2001 to 2010. Commencing of overseas students have been increased as well but it showed slight change of increase compared to the total of overseas students. In 2001, there was not much of a gap between total of overseas students and commencing of overseas students but since 2004, we can see a large gap in the graph. (이 문단의 경우 구체적인 수치가 들어가야 합니다.)
On the other hand, for total of local students rapidly risen from 2001 to 2006. However, in 2007 to 2010 the figure have remained steady about 60000. For commencing of local students, the peak is in 2002 while the trough is in 2006. From 2001 to 2002 haven risen but it declined since 2003 to 2006, but from 2007 to 2008 have been risen. Whereas in 2009 and 2010 have been reduced.
Therefore, we can compare the graphs which showed oversea students and local students over ten year period.
총평: (5/6/6/5) 5.5
표 문제에서 시제를 모르시겠으면 그냥 과거로 찍으시면 됩니다. 간혹 현재완료나 미래의 사용이 요구되는 경우는 있지만, 이 표는 아니에요. 또한, 태스크1에서는 Overview를 넣는 것이 생명입니다. 꼭 넣어주세요!
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