Some people do not mind to spend their leisure time with their colleagues while some people prefer to their private life separate from their work like.
Discuss both the views and give your opinion
These days, spending leisure time with whom has been a center of the heated discussion. Some people think that people can hang out with their coworkers while others say that work and life should be separated. I think that people can enjoy their extra time with people from the same workplace. In this essay, the reasons of both opinions will be elaborated.
On the one hand, some people never make friends from the workplace due in order to protect their private life from the work. This is because workplace itself is a place just for work so that workers do not have to reveal their privacy. If they spend time together out of the company, the atmosphere of workplace can be ruined after going out together. In the workplace, proper tension among coworkers is needed to improve the productivity. However, if relationship among colleagues becomes closer through some activities such as spending vacation together, they would not be able to cannot concentrate on their tasks.
On the other hand, it is believed that people can make friends regardless of the places they are in. Also, the relationship between coworkers can be maintained maintaining after the resignation. This is because the workplace itself is one of the societies society that people can make new relationship. Moreover, some people think spending time after work with colleagues can improve productivity since they can understand their personalities and circumstances well. For these reasons, many companies already promote workers to spend time together in the leisure time.
To sum up, it is quite debatable whether it is better to spend spending time with colleagues or protect protecting privacy from the work. Although relationships that are too deep among coworkers can ruin the atmosphere of the workplace, I believe that people can make new friends in their workplaces and it can improve the productivity.
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