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Some people do not mind to spend their leisure time with their colleagues while some people prefer to keep their private life separate from their work life.
Discuss both the views and give your opinion. (5/10)
There is a debate about the possibility of spending free-time with co-workers, because some people say it is okay to have a fun time with their colleagues, while others believe using their time to be private only would better rather than with colleagues. Although, enjoying time with friends from company can be good options, I still believe separation from their work life is preferable.
Generally speaking, some people have many reasons to believe that having a leisure time with co-workers has numerous benefits. First and foremost, individuals can share their moments of work life freely because their co-workers know about it well and understand what situation it is. In particular, spending fun-time with colleagues makes build up good relationship with them, as a result, that makes work efficiency and a synergy effect at work. Not just that but also, they can motivate one another at having a leisure time as they can cheer him up when someone is having a hard time. Last but not the least, workers can expand their relationship and broaden their horizons through getting along with co-workers.
On the other hand, I am of the opinion that keeping personal life from company is more indispensable because this world follows work and life balance. As a matter of fact, some people do not like to be bothered by company after business time because they regard private life as important. In conjunction, separating their life from work can make them focus on close friends and family as spending more precious time with them. In the long run, as having time privately, they can fully recharge their batteries at reading, taking a nap, writing on their diary at home, and as a result, it brings best condition at work. To illustrate, Koreans, these days, tend to turn off the chatting room of their company on messenger considering that they seem not to want to be disturbed at their work life.
In conclusion, while spending leisure time with co-workers is allowable, in my opinion, keeping one’s free time from company likes better.