The given bar chart illustrates the proportion of households who owned and rented accommodation in the UK and Wales between the years 1918 and 2011.
Overall, it is clear that the rate of households in owned accommodation was significantly higher than that of households in rented accommodation until 1961, while this trend was reversed after the two figures met in 1971.
A more detailed look at the bar chart reveals that households who own accommodation accounted for the largest ratio, with about 77 percent in 1918. However, it considerably declined to slightly above 30 percent in 2001, until it went up to roughly 35 percent by the end of 2011.
With regard to households that rented accommodation, it increased significantly from around 22 percent in 1918 to 50 percent in 1971, meeting the percentage of households in owned accommodation. In 1981, it surpassed the other figure and continually climbed to well under 70 percent for the year 2001. Despite the continual growth, it fell to nearly 65% by the end of the year in question.
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