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In developed countries, the seriousness of
obesity among children is getting worse. With regards to this phenomenon, I believe
that many factors have affected it. In this essay, I will discuss the reasons
for this and solution as well.
We can find the reason of children’s
obesity in various factors. First of all, from an economical point of view, the
proportion of double-income families has increased has become increase because of a recession. This phenomenon
arises especially in developed countries. Also, it can lead to various issues, and obesity is one of them. If their parents work for a living, children spend a
lot of time alone, and they have to take care of themselves. Without parents,
they are likely to eat junk food, because it is more convenient. As anyone can
expect, junk food is considerably related to obesity.
Nevertheless, there is a chance to solve children's child’s obesity problem. Like I mentioned in the previous paragraph, economy can be
a cause. Therefore, it is hard to get over individually. Thus, in In order to solve this
problem, the third-party should be involved, which is the government. With taxes, the
government can make a law which is related to welfare for children who have double-income
parents.
To conclude, there are a lot of factors
which are linked with children's child’s obesity. One of them, a recession can be a cause.
There is no doubt that there is not that much that individuals can do
especially in an economic downturn. Therefore, the government should be involved
in this issue, and they have to make a law or campaign which can helpful for changing children’s eating habits.
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