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Some people think that youngsters should get involved in unpaid work, while
others oppose as it may affect their career. Discuss both the sides and give
your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include and
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There is an ongoing debate regarding teenagers’
social work. Some people say that young people should contribute themselves
to the community as they are the future core members of society. However, it
could be argued that coercing the work without payment may On the one hand, many people concur that young
people are able to learn how to collaborate with other people through the work
experience apart from their academic accomplishments. As they can make acquaintances
and good relationships with other peers who show the similar interest in certain
careers, it could be On the other hand, I strongly believe that rendering
career experiences in the midst of academic course may convey the deleterious
impact on a pupils’ school life. I do not think that senior students must get
involved in social work without the compensation. One reason is that the duress
of those work experiences can be considered as the exploitation of labors. In condensation, even though adolescents are
able to learn teamwork and knowledge of the relevant profession, I am firmly
convinced that the drawbacks of the volunteer job such as the lack of legal
boundaries for youngsters or the scarcity of concentration of a school life far
outweigh merits of the unpaid work. |
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