[Topic] You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Learning about the past has no value for those of us living in the present. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words. |
[Answer] Some people insist that the history of humans is not valuable anymore nowadays, I do not agree with this argument because the past influence to the present in various points of view. This essay will deliver the reason why I disagree and specify the reasons. The memory of past time has value that it enhances the solution of mistakes. Human has a tendency of behavior so that people fail to similar things. For instance, South Korea failed to prevent MERS 5 years ago due to shortage of research institutions and support of government. Through the failure, the government learned how to deal with global diseases and decreased the number of victims when COVID19 arrived. Moreover, national history as well as the personal memory of past is also important. Childhood memories effect to future even if grown adults cannot realized. For example, whenever I counsel the people who have mental diseases, most of people told me the childhood experiences such as abuse, isolation in family. In many cases, there is old trauma that conserved for 10~20 years. It is the reason why social workers and counselor usually ask for the history of family. Some people may argue that people should to concentrate on the present instead to waste time staying in the past. However, to live the present healthier and happier, the lesson of the past need as a route finding solutions. In conclusion, the past has powerful effect on our lives. Even though it is gone, the memory is the clue how to deal with the present problems. |
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