안녕하세요, 항상 감사드려요
task 1 첨삭 부탁드립니다.
시간은 18분 정도 걸렸고, 156자 입니다. 7점이 목표이고 12월 중으로 시험 예정입니다.
감사합니다,
Dear Jay,
Hello, I received your text message complaining about the noise last Saturday. It was my roommate’s birthday, so I invited friends to celebrate it. We had a party till 11pm on that day. Everyone was drunken and we did not realize that the time went so fast. We know that we should have ended it earlier.
Therefore, my roommate and I are sorry for the late party. We feel guilty for disturbing your weekend. We promise that it will never happen again.
However, we hope to invite your family for dinner this weekend. We want to apologize in person and to get the friendly meal for remaining this good relationship. Please let me know if you are available or we should arrange another day. Moreover, we are going to purchase a carpet for reducing the noise.
Thanks for your understanding and I apologize again. I hope to get your reply soon.
Sincerely,
Ian Jeong.