Some people regard video games as harmless fun, or even as a useful educational tool. Others, however, believe that videos games are having an adverse effect on the people who play them. In your opinion, do the drawbacks of video games outweigh the benefits?
this essay will discuss that video game is either harmless as educational device or having side effects. i think that what game is considered to drawback is great prejudice, but contrary to what people think it brings various physical and mental benefits in many way.
playing games help improving the power of creative and agility. for example, 'NinTenDo' which is invented in Japen company and popular game all over the world spurs user's brain. followed by study, this activity stimulates brain cell and boosts head spin faster, which can lead to improving education skills and also especially in case of using equipment, it can get keep healthy as doing activity and develops wit in required rapid judge and bring vitality to people as recharge battery in free time.
not only it can helps physical capacity, but also can solve raising problem solving ability possible could happen in reality . In many adventure games, facing many difficulties and it is having structures if problems were solved, you can getting massive reward. actually, workers who has been activity several challenging situations in social will be able to solve questions rather than one who was without its activity.
so if getting patience you can overcome handicap, you can leap more results as a result for that in the future.
In conclusion,for the reasons mentioned previously, i think it can bring physical and mentally profits through doing this in spare time.
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