Some children find some school subjects difficult (for example maths or philosophy), so these subjects should be optional rather than compulsory. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Schools teach their students many subjects including
math, language and art. All students take the same class but they students feel
differently about each subject. Some students are good at math while but some
students are bad. Thus, some people think some difficult subjects like math or
philosophy should be optional. However, I agree with the argument that students
have to learn these difficult subjects at school and this essay will provide
the reasons.
Frist of all, students have to try to study various
subjects including difficult ones subjects as much as possible as they can when they are
young. Young students do not know exactly what they like and want. Even though
they feel difficult to study a specific subject, they might like it later. If
they hate it continuously, they can choose a department that is not related to it
at university. Also, there are a lot of fields in math or science. Some
students might be interested in some fields, not all of the subject. Thus, it
is not good for students who have to experience many things to exclude some
subjects as optional classses.
Furthermore, the more difficult and complicated the study is, the more it makes students think. Some people think that what we learn at school is useless in life. However, it is no matter that some subjects such as philosophy or math is helpful for living. While studying these, students have to agonize continuously to solve the problems and can learn how to think and solve problems wisely. They can use the brain and develop intelligence through this activity.
In conclusion, schools have to provide many classes including not only interesting subjects but difficult ones. Students have a choice after joining a university, so they should take classes compulsorily to find their interest and what they want to be in the future.
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