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Some say that the most important thing about being rich is that one has the opportunity to help other. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It has been said that it is the most principal
that being wealthy has having the chances to help others is the most principal thing of being wealthy. I strongly believe that having opportunities
to help others should be considered as their prioritize for wealthy people.
There are some reasons to support this.
The one of reasons why it is important to have opportunities to help others is that the rich can provide new jobs for the unemployed, which might mitigate recession phenomena. For example, the rich tend to run many businesses and company not only because of their high asset but also in order to maintain their wealth. Due to this, there will be the ease of making occupies for unemployed people in different departments, such as in manufactory or assistance in investment bank. This could lead to the increase of GDP as a result of the high contribution to making profit in a country consequent upon decline in the unemployment rates.
Another reason why there is the importance
of wealthy people having chances to assist others is that they can fund charities.
This might improve the environment. For instance, It it is highly likely that major organisations(charities)
for environmental purposes struggle to act more due to the low assest. In this
regard, charities Charities will be able to be activated in terms of protecting environment
more than they are active by rich people’s financial support. This can result in
the improvement of environmental issues.
In conclusion, although there might be other important things about being rich, having opportunities to help others is advantageous in both economic and environmental perspective. Therefore, I undoubtedly argue that being rich should place the value on assisting others.
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