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Contemporary music such as hip hop and rock
music has become becomes hugely popular all over the world. Many young people listen to music while going to school or exercising the
music while going to a school or doing sports. Even though some issues from
modern music can be brought up to the society, I believe that it still gives a
good influence to the young.
In terms of some bad language swears and an incorrect grammar
in the modern music’s lyrics, some adults are worried about a bad influence it can bring to
the young. Young people are vulnerable to establish right standards yet and
they are easy to be affected by other negative circumstances which modern
lyrics includes a drug situation or harassment in general. (여기는 일단 댓글 주시는데, 절대로 문장이 길어지지 않도록 해주세요! 길어지면 그냥 무조건 손해본다고 생각하셔야 합니다.)
Nevertheless, modern music is regarded as a
good way to stress out for young people. Normally, the young are under pressure
to study hard in order to achieve a high academic performance and get along
with their school mates. In this case, listening to the music is the best way
for them to distress out instead of smoking cigarette or drinking beers illegally.
For instance, when I was in a high school, I was very depressed about a lot of
exams which I had to get good grades but there was nothing to relieve my stress
instead of listening to powerful hip hop music. I felt refreshed and was able
to forget my grades while listening to it.
Nowadays, insensible lyrics in the modern
music are issued among the public because it leads the young to a negative direction
of life. However, I personally believe that that music brings more positive
effects than negative’s in young people’s life. |