■ DirectionYou have 20 minutes to plan and write your response. Your response will be judged on the basis of The quality of writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and the relationship to the reading passage. Typically, an effective response will be 150 to 225 words.■ QuestionSummarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on the points made in the reading

Topic ▼

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

New technologies and ways of buying and selling are transforming the lives of consumers.

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

Your Answer ▼

The life pattern of consumers has is changed because of new technologies and ways of buying and selling in recent days. In my opinion, I agree am evident agreeing that new technologies like online shopping are absolutely transforming transform our life.

For example, we had to go a shop or some place where sell bags in the past if we wanted to buy a bag. However, nowadays we can buy a bag in our house or office through the internet (인터넷은 고유명사이므로, 대문자 시작입니다.), or even in the subway by a mobile. This made us to buy something easily without having to consider whether it is necessary or worthy much consider about 'Is it necessary to me?' or 'Is it worth to buy?'. In addition, we can also check the items quality by photos at online and some items is delivered in same day because of good delivery system.

Interestingly, Amazon which is a huge company sales diverse items introduce a non-human store in America as a explore. This store has a system which can check what people pick up in the store and calculate the price of those whole items. It is a good example of that one of the future store's form.

In conclusion, it seems like we will use technologies more and more and we would desire buying something faster and more convenient. So, many companies will change their method of selling system.

목표는 라이팅 6.0이고, 6월까지 점수가 필요합니다..

 본 내용은 215자이고, 시간은 50분 정도 걸린 것 같습니다.

감사합니다.

Comment ▼
일단 표면적으로는 6점이지만, 시간+분량 때문에 여기서 더 깎고 보셔야 합니다. 시간은 당장 신경쓰실 필요 없습니다. 고로 일단 분량, 즉 뭘 쓰든지 각각 150/250자를 넘길 수 있도록 연습해주세요!

수고하셨습니다 :)