There are a lot of alterations in various aspects due to development of many areas compared to the past. These changes appear(>are seen) at(>in) children’s lifestyle as well. There are differences in terms of activities during spare time and education style compared to the past. (근데 잼잼님 확실히 문법 많이 좋아졌네요.)
There are several changes in children’s lives compared to the past. Firstly, their hobbies have changed when they take a rest. In the past, most children have usually played with blocks, boardgames or dolls during their spare time. However, nowadays a lot of children play computer games or watch videos with YouTube or Netflix. (여기서 엔터 없이 가시면 됩니다.)
There is another difference in terms of education. Children can take lessons on the Internet with video chatting programs these days such as Zoom. 1Many universities as well as schools use this way method.
Some factors caused the phenomenon which children enjoy online lives. The first reason why children live on the Internet compared to the past generations is 2because device technology and the Internet have developed over a few years. Another reason is that the The Corona virus has spread to worldwide from a year and a half ago (참고로 이런 거 1년 반이 아니라 1년이라고 써도 틀리지 않으니까, 너무 이런 세세한 사실까지 신경쓰지는 마세요!). By this impact, people have lived in their home almost every day to avoid meeting with other people. For this reason, people have started enjoying online life, and many online activities have emerged as well. (여기 후반부는 싹 다 젊은 세대로 바꿔주셔야 합니다.)
In conclusion, there are several differences between children’s lives of now(>the present) and the past. They usually enjoy online games or smart phones than toys, and sometimes take education on the Internet. This is because of development of technologies and the Corona virus.