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The graph shows the estimated amount of oil production amount for several Gulf countries between 1990 and 2010. It is clear that Saudi Arabia had been producing the greatest amount of oil and Qatar had been producing the least out of these 6 countries and others are were roughly equal.

Iran, which had experienced a gradual increase, grew about 33% in their production at 3 million barrels to 4.3 million barrels from 1990 to 2010. Iraq's production had kept on improving from 1990 to 2010 and almost doubled at last. Kuwait had gone through a similar path as Iraq and their production had been also improved for about 50% at the end at 3 million barrels. Qatar, which had the least production amount of production out of all and the only country that had displayed decrease in production, did not show any notable change. Moreover, Saudi Arabia stayed almost the same from 1990 to 2000 but increased exponentially from 2000 to 2010. Lastly, UAE also had shown a gradual growth in a small amount showing roughly the same production amounts in all the years.

In conclusion, it can be said that oil production worldwide had been increasing from 1990 to 2010.

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구체적인 내용을 써주시기 이전에, 전체적인 표의 경향을 보여주는 문단을 추가해주시면 좋습니다. 처음 표를 보았을 때 딱 보이는 점은, Qatar를 제외하고는 모든 Gulf countries 에서 increasing trend를 보이고 있다는 점입니다. 이 내용을 Overall, ~로 시작하는 문단에 서술해주실 수 있을 것 같습니다. 그리고 세부 내용을 써주시는 문단에서는 각 나라별로 순서대로 설명을 써주시기 보다는 보다 눈에 띄는 특징들을 선별적으로 서술해주시는 것이 좋습니다.

수고하셨습니다 :)