The two maps illustrate the lay out of road access to a city hospital before and after renovation in the year 2007 and 2010.
Overall, it is clear that several changes saw
in the city hospital.
Looking at the diagrams more closely, one can see that the city hospital secured old location in the northern end. Furthermore, ring road had remained around the city hospital. There was public car park next to the city hospital in 2010. In the interesting point is the bus station had added where the bus stop once sat. At the centre of the map, there was the hospital road, which leads to the city hospital. In 2007, the staff and public can use the car park to the east side of the hospital road. Meanwhile, in 2010, the staff only can used the car park to the east of the hospital road. The city road had remained position in the southern end of the map. Lastly, the two roundabout had added in the middle of the hospital road, which had connected the bus station.
한가지 질문이 있는데요.. 2010년 문장에서 현재완료 시재를 써도 괜찮을까요? 과거시제가 더 나을까요?
ex) Furthermore, ring road has remained around the city hospital.
(179 word) 6점 목표입니다. 항상 감사합니다.