The given flow chart illustrates how to make frozen fish pies and shows what are the ingredients in this type of pies.
One the whole, one can see that there are about six processes to make the fish pies form being delivered from fresh salmons being delivered to packaging frozen fish pies.
Looking at the diagram more closely, at first the fresh salmon is delivered within 12 hours or less, and lemon juice and salt are put on the salmons. These are moved into a steam oven and workers remove salmon’s skin and bones and bones are put in the waste disposal. The next stage is inspecting, in which another worker again checks again salmons to see if the bones and skin is exactly separated which separated bones and skin exactly. After that, prepared peas and sauce are laid on salmons as well as potatoes also are put on theses. As for potatoes, those are delivered up to one month ago, and these were cleaned and peeled. The potatoes which are peeled were sliced and then these are went in to the boll, chill, and store. (얘를 연어보다 먼저 언급해주셔야 합니다.) The salmons that have peas, sauce and potatoes are wrapped in each pieces, then frozen, and finally packed in separate boxes followed by these are frozen and packing in the boxes.
6.5 목표인데 29 분 걸렸어요ㅠㅠㅠ
총평: (7/6/6/6) 6.5
일단 저는 6.5를 드리긴 했지만, 이는 현재 글이 시험장에서 그대로 20분 내로 제출되었을 때를 가정으로 합니다. 그러나 지금은 29분이나 걸렸기 때문에, 실전이었다면 1. 미완성으로 제출되었거나, 2. 완성되었다하더라도 질이 현저히 떨어졌을 겁니다.
시간 맞추는 것, 즉 실전 적응은 글을 쓰는 것 못지 않게 매우 중요하므로, 꼭 20분 내로 검토까지 다 할 수 있도록 연습해주세요~
수고하셨습니다 :)