You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
It is better for college students to live far away from home than live at home with their parents. Do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
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Nowadays, most college students live a long distance from home and some people say that there are some inconveniences when they live on their own away from their parents house. However, I opine that there are more benefits when college students living in the house around the university.
To begin with, there are two main problems when college students live with their parents. First of all, students can be a violation of their privacy from their parents. To be specific, generally, when they turn twenty, they become aware of being adults and do not want to be violated by their parents students have the right to get out of their parents constraints and experience things they have not done. Moreover, they waste a time when they live in the parent house. For example, in my experience when I go to university it usually takes 1 hour by public transportation and this is a hard part it is because most universities start classes at 9 am and finish at 8 pm and theses means they can not avoid from rush hour and in these process they feel uncomfortable and tired.
There are two benefits when students live in their apartment or house. First and foremost, they can learn about responsibility. For example, if they live alone they have to handle things such as rent and meals on their own. In this process, they can have a sense of responsibility as an adult and a time to think seriously about their future. Also, students can use their time efficiently. Most school-going students waste their time by using transportation in contrast, students who live on their own may have the opportunity to use the time efficiently they can do a part-time job and study for a certificate and these minor differences make a big difference later on between a student living alone and school-going students.
As it has been demonstrated, college students who live with their parents can be facing uncomfortable situations such as an invasion of privacy and wasting time. However, in contrast student who lives alone, they can learn responsibilities and also can earn a salary.
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