You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The first chart below shows the results of a survey which sampled a cross-section of 100,000 people asking if they traveled abroad and why they traveled for the period 1994-98. The second chart shows their destinations over the same period. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below You should write at least 150 words.
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[Answer] The given charts
illustrate the number of travelers by several purposes from 1994 to 1998 and
(문단을 나눌 때에는 엔터키를 두 번 쳐주세요! 이것도 점수에 들어갑니다.) The number of travelers
for vacation is biggest in 1998 recording 20,700 people which is four times
bigger than figure of business travelers and six times bigger than amount of visitors
to friend and relatives. On the other hand, there is a decreased figure in
1995. The number of visitors going abroad for holiday is 14,898 people which
is smallest figure in five years period. As the bar graph shows,
most people who visit abroad are towards | |||||||||
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총평: 다른데에서도 문제가 없는 건 아니지만, 그래도 제일 중요한 Overview 관련해서 말씀드리자면, 자료가 두 개 이상이 있을 때에는 순서대로 Overview에서 다뤄주셔야 합니다. 즉, 방학 관련 내용이 먼저 나온 다음에 이후 두 번째 표에 대한 사항을 적어주시면 돼요. 고로 Overall, 방학, 서유럽~의 순서를 가진 문장을 만들어주시면 됩니다.
수고하셨습니다 :)