The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children's charity located in the USA spent and received in one year, 2016.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The two pie charts delineate the percentage of revenue from six different sources or expenditures on three sectors that a children’s charity received and spent in the USA in 2016; 세미콜론 뒤에 오는 단어는 소문자 시작입니다.)It it also indicates the total amounts of income and expense in the legend.
Overall, it is clearly seen that donated food made the biggest contribution to the charity, while investment income and government grants were equally the smallest fractions. On the other hand, program services were the most significant part of the expenditure, whereas management and general contributed to the least.
According to the first chart, donated food made up about three-quarters of the revenue sources, which accounted for 86.6%, while the other five factors shared the left one-quarter remaining quarter including community contribution(10.4%), program revenue(2.2%), other income(0.4%) in order and investment income and government grants constituted of equally at 0.2% which made up the lowest fractions.
In the second chart, program services contributed to 95.8% expenditure as the largest fraction in the charity’s expense; (여기의 경우 세미콜론을 쓰기에는 조금 애매합니다. 아예 틀리거나 하지는 않지만요.) It was followed by fundraising, management and general at 2.6% and 1.6%, respectively. Compared with the total amount of income and expense, the charity spent less money than its revenue. (얘는 사실 Overview에 가야합니다.)
글자수 : 193자
걸린시간 : 13분
목표점수 : 7.0
시험날짜 : 10월 10일
항상 감사합니다:)!
총평: (8/7/8/7) 7.5
실전에서는 절대로 이렇게 쉬운 표가 나오지는 않지만(표가 쉬우면 학생들도 쓸 말이 없고, 채점관들도 채점하기 어렵습니다.) 여하튼 잘 써주셨습니다. 7.0은 무조건 넘기니까 크게 걱정하지 않으셔도 돼요.
수고하셨습니다 :)