Q.
Some people say that the main environmental
problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others
say that there are more important environmental problems.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
A.
There is no doubt that human beings lie on
various environmental problems. With regards to this, some people say the main
problem of our era is the distinction of living things. On the other hand,
others say there are more serious problem. This essay will discuss both point
of views and my opinion as well.
It is obvious that distinction of living
things is the serious problem. First of all, distinction of living things can
cause the problem of food chain. If specific predator is disappeared, the
balance of the ecosystem in wild will fall apart. However, I would be cautious
to claim that it is the main of the environment issue. It is because, almost
every problem is connected each other. For example, I people do not recycle the
garbage, it will be lead to the air pollution and damage to creatures, causing
extinction. Therefore, I strongly believe there is no main environmental
problem, everything is critical.
As many problems are linked, it is
important to know that there are many significant nature issues that we have to
take care of, rather than saying there are more important issues. It can be
recycling, air pollution, cutting the trees, etc. Furthermore, in order to save
our plane, we have to practice what we know from small things to big things.
To conclude, I strongly believe that every environmental
issues ca affect each other. Therefore, people have to keep in mind that our trivial
behaviors also can influence on the environment.
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