The diagram shows that a the proportion of occupation of students who graduated with an Anthropology degree from their university. The table chart indicates that how many earn how much the anthropologists in various fields earn can after 5 years work.
It is clear that nearly half of students who studying degree course of anthropology can get a full-time jobs, (~할 수 있다는 중요하지 않습니다. 이미 확정된 수치이므로, ~했다라고 적어주셔야 해요. 다른데 역시 싹 다 마찬가지입니다.) and by working in their part for 5 years, they can earn over $75,000.
According to first circle, the largest part of the chart is full-time work, and, the percentage points of that part whose people graduate with the degree is almost 50%. Part-time work is the runner-up of this diagram, at the point is 15%. Another interesting factor in the chart is that the rates of those that went into full-time postgrad study, and those are not known are equal, as 8%.
In the table below, there are three types of employment, Freelance consultants, Government sector and Private companies (싹 소문자 시작입니다.). 80% of people People who have having a job like consultants, as 80%, can get a income over $75,000, and even 40% of them receive is over 100,000$. (여기서 엔터 따로 치지 않습니다.)
The similar trend can be seen when we look other two types of occupation, over 50% of people in each part can get a plethora of money, each point is 80% and 55% respectively.
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