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As the science
and technology develops, the cloning becomes a reality. Some people criticize the
cloning because it will bring the uncertainty of phenomenon of the human health and
the society. However, in my perspective, cloning is the opportunity for the
medical growth and helping the infertile couples.
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Cloning can bring
a chaos to society. Since the consequences and the side effects of such an
experiment have not been found, it is understandable that, citizens feeling
fearful to be the cloning becoming a the reality. Also, there are many evidences of
animal testing failure on cloning. The humans have diversity of genes, which
comes from parents who have different sets of genes. This complexity can weaken
by the use of cloning, and it may reduce the immune system to be vulnerable for
new maladies and can cause in organ rejection. Because the cloning may cause
the differences in the cell make-up between the original and replicated organs,
everyone could suffer from unknown side effects. <Need better coherence> The replication can cause the
side effects and it can also bring back the people from the dead death. Being able
to clone someone who had died, it will devalue the life that they have.
Despite all these
fearful consequences, there are two distinctive opportunities to be considered.
The future medical growth and the aid for the infertile couples are the main
advantages for cloning. There are many couples around the world who are
suffering from infertility. Infertile couples, who are infertile, will be able to
naturally conceive a child with the use of cloning. This would open the
possibilities for gay or lesbian couples to allow them to have children
containing both parents' DNA and genes. In addition, cloning is the process of
mimicking the God's action. The replication of human is the final stage of all
medical development, because a human is made up of complex DNA and genes. Once
cloning is becoming a common practice perfectly, many other worlds of medical
research would be expanded. Because the world has no death, there will be no
sorrows, thus; the future will be full of longevity lifestyles.
Although the
cloning can be fearful socially and physically since the future consequence is (not known)/ unknown, the future scientific growth is worth more because it can improve
our life convenience.
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