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There have been a lot of changes in the life of young students, and they do not enjoy sports much than in the past. In this regard, it is often argued that they now play more computer games and it is argued that (dhll님 실력이면 왜 이쪽으로 바뀌었는지 금방 파악하실 거라 따로 설명을 넣지는 않겠습니다.) this trend can be a problem. In this essay, I will discuss the causes and solutions of it.
The reason why students prefer computer games more than sports is because their lifestyle the lifestyle of them has become sedentary. These days, young people have to spend most of their time on studying. They mostly learn academic subjects, and the schools do not allow them to do sports. In this environment, it is almost impossible to set aside time for outdoor activities, and it can be easier for them to choose computer games if they want some dynamics in life. (공부하느라 진이 다 빠져서 나갈 힘이 없다~이런 식으로 적어주시는 것도 괜찮습니다.)
In order to make the students to stop playing computer games and live a healthier life, schools should take more responsibilities and provide some afterschool programmes that includes outdoor sporting games. In this way, the pupils will be encouraged to learn how to recharge and focus their energy again in a better way to study in class. The students themselves should also acknowledge the problem and apply the solutions to their lifestyle.
In conclusion, students today spend more time on playing computer games than on sports because of their sedentary life in class. (여기는 반전의 역할을 하는 연결어 등을 넣어서 매끄럽게 이어주세요!) This problem can be solved by participating in sporting programmes after school. |